One of the biggest nits is, "HOw did Sinclair make it to Earth so fast?" I guess hyperspace treated his trip home VERY well. The dates don't match with thise given in "Points of Departure". Also, it took a while for Ivanova's promotion to go through. It is nice that the events in the comics here (#1-4) were referenced to in the book "To Dream in the City of Sorrows".

Also the language in Sinclair's dream about the Battle of the Line has been altered (even JMS had a problem with this change). Apparently, DC Comics are not allowed to use the word "bastard" so it was changed to demon or devil or something like that (I don't have the issue onhand at the moment).

That's true. I remember when I first read that I though it was ridiculous. If they can't use the word they should have done what the previews for that episode did "If I go out I'm taking you with me" Just cut the word out and the sentence still works. Demons just doesn't sound right in the context by that character.