There. Now all non story related material has a nice place of it's own.
Anyway, I've come to a decision when it comes to the story.
Chapter 16 will be the last chapter of this story. I know, you'd probably want the story to go on forever like the LICC (yeah, right), but really, how long can a guy like Jake Grey get away with what he does without getting some kind of justice. What I have not decided yet is how, but we'll burn that bridge when we cross it.
But don't worry. It won't be the end of the Archangel and her crew. No sir.
The next story is a 12 parter, called "Rebuild" in which those who survive "The Hunt For Jake Grey" recruit people from around the multiverse to restore the XDCA. Of course it will feature occasional pirate battles, an old LICC enemy seeking revenge against Tacoman by killing his father (Greymoran), and dimensional anamolies in the classic Star Trek style of stupidity. Following that will be "Mirror Dance" in which a new universe is discovered. A universe run by the XDCA's 'evil twin.' Here are some titles I've picked out that I like for possible future chapters of the Adventures of the Archangel. I don't have any story ideas for most of them yet. I just think they sound cool;
First, the ones I DO have story ideas for;
Moving Mars (Hope to reunite Keith Yeager and Jackson Dupree with the characters from Kim Stanley Robinson's Mars Trilogy, as old frineds of Jake Grey decide to mess with the Red Mars universe).
Vectors (This one I intend to follow Moving Mars. The aforementioned friends of Jake Grey plot their revenge).
Warlords (Through a naturally occuring dimensional anomoly, The Drakh from B5 find themselves in Alliance with the Sssi-Ruuk from Star Wars, who promptly launch an assault on Earth, Minbar, and B5 herself).
I actually plan to have Warlords be the last chapter in the Archnagel's story, but that will be left up to my new friend Jon Wade.
So, what do you think?
Sounds like good ideas...
In light of what you're doing, I took it upon myself to change the name, since no one was calling it Greymoran's Revenge anymore. Hope you don't mind Brian.
Not a bad idea Sax. I wish you'd asked me first though.
I might like to join sometime... I made a post early on as "Cutthroat Jimlad" and my decision was basically - if anyone followed it up I would stay. No-one did, but I may be bck, as Cutthroat Jimlad or someone else. Cutthroat Jimlad is a dimensional counterpart of my LICC character - PD Insane. I might also get the Red Guy to join in, he likes Baldur's Gate.
Padawan: I'm afraid that Archangel is not as silly as LICC. If you read over all the posts here you find drama is the primary component. If you want to play a character, it should be a serious character, who grows and evolves as the story plays out, like a character in a good novel. Beisdes. We already have our comic relief. Carrie.
Oh. Well, I'll see what I can do, but I'm not as gothic as you are.
Jon!
Just had a great idea for "The Sum of It's Parts"!
A flashback chaper, where we basically see what the crew members did before they joined the Archangel crew! If Josh has read the Casting section he'll have a good idea what to do. And knowing a little more about Ahz would be interesting. I also have a little story about Greymoran's early days, when he, Radagast, and jake Grey were the cream of the XDCA crop, before the latter two became evil.
What do you think?
OK, we clearly decided NOT to go down that path with Chapter V.
But I'd still like to see bits and pieces of Ahz's past revealed throughout the upcoming chapters.
I'd do one, but I haven't had time for any lengthy posts recently, and I haven't read this board for a while
Josh: Oh, you're Ahz's author too? I had no idea. And all this time I thought we had four people.
I'm not Josh. You do have four people.
I know who Ahz's author is.
Oh. Then why did Josh respond to my idea about Ahz?
We're not talking about the flashback thing anymore? I was going to do a flashback for Hudzen, even though he's an android and probably doesn't flash back too often.
Josh: Well, everything before the XDCA picked him up we know from the Red Dwarf epsiode The Last Day. We know that after Grey began killing people Hudzen led an unsuccesful mutiny to save lives. But how much time passed between being picked up from RD, and becoming Grey's chief of security? And what happened between becoming chief of secutirty, and leading the mutiny? Since Hudzen is your character now, why don't you fill in the blanks?
The Archangel Website has been updated. It includes a corrected version of Chapter IV (red dots replaced with the intended profanities, plus a few spelling erorr fixed, though only the ones that stood out, so as not to remove it's humanity).
Josh: Did you get my email on your Yahoo address? It has the MiSTing of Jake Grey Part I in it!
NOTE: I am NOT JD. I am going to refine my MiSTing talents by poking fun at the Chapter Title List.
Casting The Archangel
With Jerry Mathers as the Beaver.
The Archangel Discussion Board
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The Hunt For Jake Grey Part One
While I hunt for my sionide capsules.
The Omega Search: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Two
I just hope it's better then The Omega Code.
Rescue: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Three
Hosted by William Shatner!
NO!!!!!!
Cold Comfort: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Four
Isn't that a hemmoroid cream?
The Sum of Its Parts: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Five
You know if you combined all the personalities of the crew together you'd get Matthew Lillard from Scream?
Consequences: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Six
Conseguences Schmonsequences!
In The Still Darkness: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Seven
Hey isn't that a B5 epsiode title? Theives!
Code of Hero: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Eight
Starring Kelsey Bad Grammar.
Another Time, Another Place: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Nine
We might have been friends. Oh well. Guess I'll still have to kill you.
The Head of Caesar: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Ten
Bring me that head on a salad with some Thousand Island dressing!
Space Station Down: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Eleven
I hope there aren't any rabbits in this episode.
The Mind of Evil: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Twelve
Yes, you too can be elected President of the United States!
Scorched Earth: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Thirteen
Will you PLEASE stop picking on that poor planet? Hasn't she been throguh enough?
Nowhere to Run: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Fourteen
...to baby. Nowhere to hide...
Knock it off!
Showdown: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Fifteen
This is the part where the Archangel crew turns into the Earp brothers and...
The Rings: The Hunt For Jake Grey Part Sixteen (Final Chapter)
Yea! Final Chapter! Whoo-hoo!
Oh no! Gratutitous Lord of the Rings reference!
Good day, everyone. I'd just like to announce that my MiSTing of Brian Webber and Friends' story, "The Hunt for Jake Grey, Part I", is available for reading at the Web Site #9 MiSTings Repository.
http://pinky.wtower.com/mst3k/mistings.shtml
Click on "Date" to find it. Thanks for your time.
Irated it a 10! It just gets funnier every time I read it.
The website has been updated, just so you know.
Speaking of which, when are we gonna get a pic and stats/bio for Ryo-O?
Well, now i get the title.
Killing Mulder and Scully! That's the last straw. That guy is going down!
http://www.geocities.com/greymoransrevenge/ Updated the site! Now there's a special section dedicated to the ships of Archangel, including some stats on Grey's monstrosity, officially named Macedonia 1.
I've got an idea for a character...
A drunken, Irish vampire named Cassidy, who...waitaminute...that's in Preacher!!
How about a coldblooded, cyber-assassin who used to work for Jakr Grey, but had a change of heart? I'm thinking of a guy with cyber-enhanced speed and strength, trained in the martial arts, with cybernetic kama blades that slide out of his mechanical arms (looks like he's holding them, but they're really attached)?
Josh: You still there? Cause I'd like Hudzen to actually DO something before this chapter is over. I've dropepd several hints thorughout this entire current chapter, and through the last few of Sum of Its Parts about what that something MIGHT be, but it's all on you to figure it out.
Jon: I'm changing the plot for Chapter 7, and if Josh doesn't come back, I'll either take over Hudzen for myself, or I'll simply change the plot for that chapter too.
Gotcha Brian.
Looking at what you just wrote, I found my own misting...
when you talk about the sword that Rita has, and Keith's mission with the real Captain Tacoman...
Insert your own Real Slim Shady joke here
It's not finished but what the hell. It's time to debut the partially completed new home of the NitCentral Cybersoaps!
http://nccybersoaps.homesead.com
I believe that the shooting at Kent State was actually in 1970, 31 years ago.
Isn't the Code of Hero board getting kind of long. Should we head to the next board?
Josh: We have to wait for jon to catch up.
So is Hudzen just a non comm then?
Josh: Yeah, pretty much. Of course, and I'll put it in a later post, robots are exempt from uniform codes, in case you were wondering.
I guess you could I am caught up... So when will Keith and Jackson get their ranks?
OK guys, we're moving to LICC for a little while.
Daedalus-class is an interesting idea for the ships... the Spidermobile II looks rather like a Daedalus-class vessel in flight mode.
The Archangel site has been updated.